I was so disgusted with my first effort that I've done another today. Still less than 100% happy with it but it is an improvement and gets me painting again.
The initial drawing using a Pentel 07 2B mechanical pencil and using the modified contour method of Charles Reid.
Similar colours and three brushes. The Isabey 6228 Kolinsky nos 4 and 8 plus the retractable 6.